Books: Market Research

When writing a book, it’s good to think about your intended audience. The absolute best way to do this, is to ask. 

I am lucky to have four children. Whenever I start a children’s or tween book, I ask their advice. To help my fellow authors, here is what my children said what they like about books.

Remember, I did not coach them or help them with their answers. I just asked a simple question: “What makes a good book?”

Zach Knight (Age 9):

* Short chapters.

* Main characters tells us about their lives.

* The story should be interesting.

* The title should be interesting.

* I do not like big pictures in the book, but if the picture tells about facts, then that is okay.

Kayci Knight (Age 10)

* Funny characters.

* Short chapters.

* Scary titles.

* A lot of pictures.

* At least 200 pages in the book.

Samantha Knight (Age 11)

* Characters must be crazy!

* Chapters should be short.

* The book should be at least 200 pages long.

* The pictures in the book should be “sketchy.”

* The stories should be mysterious.

Kiana Knight (Age 12)

* Short chapters.

* Characters should be funny, goofy, and act their age.

* The story should be filled with action, mystery, and humor.

* The story should keep moving and makes me want to turn the page and never put the book down.

* I prefer books that are between 200 and 300 pages long.

Thank you kids!

What did I learn from asking that simple question? Well, look at the pattern:

* Every child said, “Short chapters.” I bet if you ask adult readers, they would say the same thing. I’ve talked about short chapters in my last blog. It’s what the audience wants!

* “Story should keep moving.” Authors, you might as well write books with a fast pace. This is what readers of all ages want.

* I noticed that the kids like books with about 200 pages. Most authors who write for ages 9-12 may think that a 100 page book will be better for them. Not so. Kids want a challenge!

* I saw the word “mystery, interesting, humor.” Children like suspense, great plots, and they want to laugh. 

*  Of course, even children in middle school like to see some pictures. I believe that books which have at least one illustration for every five pages, makes a big impact on the kids. For you adult fiction writers, don’t be afraid to add some illustrations at the beginning of your chapters. Visual art is powerful!

* Notice that kids look at the title. When you come up with your title, ask others. Study their reaction. Remember, when someone picks up your book for the first time, you have 11 seconds to sell them. After 11 seconds, if the customer is not convinced, they will not purchase the book. What is the first thing they look at? The title.

Well, the kids are on Spring Break and I get to spend time with them and take my break from writing. But hey, nothing wrong with a little market research while their home…

Just for fun, I asked the kids this other question: “What is the hardest thing about your father being an author?” Here is what they said:

Zach Knight: “I have to always give dad ideas.”

Kayci Knight: “Dad makes us read all the time. Wherever we go, dad makes us bring a book.”

Samantha Knight: “I always bug him about words in my book that I don’t know.”

Kiana Knight: “When I write stories for school, dad is always hard on me when he looks over what I wrote.”

If you are going to be an author, ask others what they like about books and what makes a great story.

Ron Knight

Author, Reader, and Co-Founder of UP Authors

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